16 thoughts on “Passenger ”

  1. I love this haha! What a great take on the prompt; because surely that’s all we are doing, travelling around the sun with one another? Love it!

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    1. Thank you. I feel happy that you liked my hurried attempt at the daily prompt. My daughter whom I am currently visiting was calling me repeatedly that she wanted me downstairs so that we could leave. I was trying to draw and thinking what to write. Sometimes one can’t think beyond a few words when under pressure.

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      1. Well you couldn’t tell that so much was going on at the same time! Less words has definitely worked for you here 🙂

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  2. I’m not a poetry person, so often the deeper meaning is over my head, but on the surface… I liked this poem because I’ve always wondered all the traffic in Southern CA – the freeways are crowded no matter what time of day. We travel a bit and find ourselves on highways around 11pm at night (or 2AM) and hit traffic and always wonder “Where are they or we…all going?”

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    1. I was doing the same thing today –wondering. I am on a visit to daughter. We had gone on a picnic, and were retuning home in the evening. The traffic was slow, and I looked at the long line of cars. I kept wondering where were all those people going?

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