Will It Last?

Daily Prompt: Linger
Tell about the times in which you linger — when you don’t want an event, or a day to end. What is it you love about these times? Why do you wish you could linger forever?


Will It Last?

16 thoughts on “Will It Last?”

  1. I love how you said : God please make it last another day. You wrote it beautifully 🙂
    I do however have one suggestion, I hope you won’t mind. The background is a little too filled which makes it a little hard to read the beautiful words you wrote. I think your words would have shone more with a little toned down background. Although the picture is amazing 🙂
    I hope you didn’t mind, if you did I’m sorry 🙂


    1. No, I don’t mind it at all. Please feel free to point out my mistakes and do criticize my efforts.
      Actually I was feeling off today. I drew a picture first. I was not satisfied with it. I am not happy with what I did.


      1. Hey hey no need to feel down. Its the words that matter ! Not the looks. You wrote some pretty powerful words there with that poem. The quality of your writing is never to be criticized.
        I’m sorry if I made you feel that way. I just wanted to give some positive feedback 🙂


      2. I was feeling down not because of you but at my own inability to find a picture to go with the poetry. I welcome what you wrote to me. Thank you.


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